Too many fantasy books rely on the same tired tropes to get their story across. Author Patrick Carr avoids that trap admirably by creating a world of bold ideas and characters. Yet poor plotting and writing mar an otherwise worthy premise, leading to a rough story needing just that bit more polish to rate as high as it aims.
There were plenty of twists built into a fairly linear story, but these came across as jarring rather than inventive. Character reveals and plot devices sometimes came out of nowhere and serve more to drag the story than help it progress. Also, the action zagged in ways that continually restructured the plot. At first it started as a fairly standard quest to save kingdom, yet this band is quickly broken and we don't reunite with some of the characters until the very end of the book. The ensuing subplot was far more engaging, but came to an abrupt end without resolution once the A plot resumed. The big reveal for one of the first mysteries introduced left me underwhelmed, wondering why it was such a secret to begin with.
The uneven plot might have been forgiven had the writing presented more flourish. It's passable prose on the whole, simply written, but prone to an overabundance of adjectives and adverbs. Little of the description is of interest or exists for a true narrative purpose. Knowing the color of every secondary character's hair, eyes, and/or clothes serves little purpose but to fill pages.
Errol himself is a surprising protagonist, and the author doesn't flinch in portraying the struggles an admitted drunkard must endure merely to survive. His personal journey is the far more interesting story and provides its main source of charm as he grows into a plucky, resourceful character with quite the unique set of skills. The other characters, while not given nearly as much time for development, were nevertheless well conceived and executed. However, the lead villain was introduced far too late for me to have any dread of him, weakening the final climax and diluting the stakes established by previous battles.
I rather liked the concept of a triplet theopolitical structure, with the monarchy, the church, and a third institution imitating the three persons of the divine Trinity, with all the ensuing politics such a world might develop. Unfortunately this motif only became clear in the latter third of the book, robbing the story of much of its meaning. It nonetheless gives me high hopes for the sequel.
Its heart is certainly in the right place, and by the end I felt the book had finally settled into the story it wanted to be. Would that it had known the same from the start to make a truly great read. As it is, the book's mildly entertaining journey lacks the emotional payoff needed to make it truly worth the trip.
Patrick Carr has created a magnificent storyworld in A Cast of Stones. His characters too are diverse and realistic. The hero experiences a great deal of growth throughout the novel and the plot rarely slows. I will read the sequels if my library does get the next two in.
But I did have a problem with the casting of the lots. Now, I do l know of the lot casting in the old testament to determine the will of God, but what is done in this world looks a lot more like divination to me, which is highly forbidden. The characters making the lots don't focus themselves on God or his will when crafting, frankly I can hardly see where he enters the casting at all. And if God were controlling the lots, shouldn't the cast always be right the first time as God is always right? But instead the casters have to cast dozens of times to make sure it's correct.
Doesn't sound like God does it? If it wasn't for this massive issue I would have rated the book much higher. But The Cast of Stones just feels too wrong to be right.
Title: A Cast of Stones (The Staff and the Sword book 1)
Author: Patrick W. Carr
My Rating: 5/5
I honestly had no idea what to expect when I picked up this book to read it. What I found was a delightful surprise. With an entirely unique spin to the typical story of kings, adventure, sword fights, and quests, this book grabbed my attention and had me hooked to the very end.
Errol Stone has no idea of the amazing talent and potential that he possesses. He sees himself as almost anyone else does. As a drunk. However, when someone offers to pay him for delivering a message, he quickly accepts, thinking that the money would help him to purchase more ale. What follows this seemingly simple task is an unforgettable, and unpredictable adventure that will change his heart, and his destiny.
I absolutely loved the setting of this book. Carr did an excellent job at painting a vivid picture of Errol's surroundings that helped me to become much more engaged in the plot. The time and culture in which this story occurs drew me in quickly and easily. Another aspect of the book that I enjoyed was the way in which Errol's character matures, changes and learns throughout the book. This made him seem so much more real and believable. I soon became very attached to his character, and found myself rejoicing in his victories and grieving over his trials.
My only negative remark in regards to this otherwise wonderful masterpiece would be that at times I felt that particular characters entered and left the story far too quickly, leaving little time for them to truly become developed or contribute much to the plot. I found myself waiting for them to somehow be worked back into the story, thinking that they had left far too abruptly, but they never did. However, this is only the first book in the series, so perhaps Carr plans to reunite the characters in a later book.
Over all, I would say that this creative, engaging and wonderfully written book is one that I would most definitely recommend, and greatly enjoyed!
Note: I received this book free from the publisher in exchange for my honest review. However, my opinions are my own.